Krabs vs. Plankton (source: Odysse)
Mr. Krabs arrived their first and started to explore. Plankton got there a little later and was on the other side exploring. Occasionally they would see each other and would glare and go back searching.
Mr. Krabs came across this household that was obviously very poor. He thought about skipping it simply just because of the way it looked. However, he went in. He told them what he was looking for. The young girl in the house needed money to survive. She begged him to please help her out and he said not without giving me what I deseire. The young girl began to cry "I don't know if I have what you are looking for. I just have this old cookbook my grandfather gave me." Mr. Krabs scoffed. "I could buy a cookbook from the store. Why would I want your grandfathers?" said Mr. Krabs. The young girl looked at him and said "he always made the best food and his burgers were my favorite." Mr.Krabs asked to look at the book. He flipped through the pages and it seemed like a normal cookbook. However tucked between some pages was a recipe, a recipe to his burger. Mr. Krabs had to hold back his excitement. He knew this could possibly lead him to a fortune but as a cheap and greedy crab he did not want to pay much for this so he said it was not valuable and all he could give her was 1cent. The girl cried and held on to the book so Mr. Krabs left and planned on returning to see if the girl would change her mind.
However, Plankton then came in when Mr. Krabs left. He told her what he was looking for and she said I don't have what you want. A crab came in here and told me that this book I had was pretty much worthless. Plankton the wise scientist, wanted to see this book and verify for himself. She showed him the book and he begin looking through it and saw the recipe. He said "That was a foolish crab. This book is so valuable. I will give you my restaurant and all the money I have. Use it to go to school and get a good life!" The girl was so happy that tears of joy began to leak out. Plankton quickly left the town and moved to a new city.
Mr. Krabs, eventually came back to the house and saw the girl moving. He said, "What happened? Have you gone broke?" "Oh, the contrary", she said, "I am rich. A little plankton came in and bought the book from me with all that he had." Mr. Krabs was furious. He knew his enemy had won. Krabs would no longer have the best burger under the sea.
Plankton started his own business in a new city. His burger gained a lot of popularity and within a couple of months, he was the richest person under the sea and had the best burger under the sea.
Authors Note: I modeled this story off of the Merchant of Seri by Ellen C. Babbitt. In the story there were two merchants that were friends. They both were selling things. One was greedy and wanted to get a bunch of things for as cheap as possible and then sell them for as expensive as possible. The other was a fair merchant who just wanted to live happily and search for treasure but not cheat people. The greedy one found a pan made of gold and told the family it was worthless while the other one came in and bought it and became the richest person. I thought it would be fun to do this story about Spongebob characters. Mr. Krabs immediately popped in my head because he is greedy. I decided to do plankton simply because they are always against each other and are doing the same thing of searching for the best recipe.
Bibliography: Jataka Tales: Merchant of Seri by Ellen C. Babbitt. Gatewaytotheclassics
Hey Joshua,
ReplyDeleteFirst off, I loved your story! I grew up watching SpongeBob so I felt like I was back in my grandmother's living room watching it as I read your story. Secondly, make sure you go back and proofread your writing. There were a few spelling mistakes and there were places that need certain punctuation that you could catch when you read out loud. Anyways, I loved your story and I look forward to reading more!
Hey Joshua, I really enjoyed reading your story. I always like it when stories and retellings are inspired by old childhood tv shows or books. I think this nostalgia adds a different perspective to the stories being told that a regular retelling would not be able to. I think your interpretation was spot on. Seeing Mr. Krabs as the stingy merchant is a no-brainer. Good job, man.
ReplyDeleteHi Joshua,
ReplyDeleteMr. Krabs sure is greedy isn't he? You always see it during the show, but never think that it might be a bad thing. Instead, you just hate on Plankton because nobody wants that little pipsqueak to win. Well, now he gets to win. That greediness finally catches up with Mr. Krabs, even if it's in an alternate reality. It's cool how you could tie this in with the Merchant of Seri and have Plankton win for a change.
Hi Joshua, I really liked your story! You seem to have great choice in fictional characters for your stories. When I saw this story starred Mr. Krabs and Plankton, I knew I had to take a look. You modeled the two of them perfectly, in my opinion. Mr. Krabs is by far the greediest crab I know from fiction, and the rivalry between Mr. Krabs and Plankton is certainly strong. Your ending was also interesting, I thought that Mr. Krabs would get the recipe before Plankton, but boy was I wrong. Great story!
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